Archives for January 15, 2016

HW due 1/19: Term Final 1st Draft

1. Term Finals (5-7 pages) Term Final Guidelines

I expect everyone to be present Tuesday! If you are absent and you do not have an excuse from either a parent or doctor, then your essay will be marked late. Further, you will not be paired with an editor (as these pairings will take place Tuesday in class) thus receiving a zero as everyone is expected to edit a peer’s essay.

General Formatting:

  • Double-spaced; size 12 font; Times New Roman or similar
  • .75 margins on both left and right sides. Justify margin. Indentations– .5” or 1 tab space.
  • All pages beyond the first page should be numbered.  Page numbers should be placed at the bottom right of each page.
  • No Cover Page.  Include name, class, and date (Single space the heading)
  • Be sure TITLE reflects the theme of the essay (for instance, 1984: Hierarchical Hegemony)
  • Include Title, Author, and General Theme of work in first paragraph of essay…For Example—Jean Paul Sartre’s Nausea
  • Follow MLA guidelines

Avoid the Following:

  • Avoid Pronouns: I, it, you, me, we, us
  • Avoid Troublesome language. Do your best to avoid the following words: it, these, this, those, kind of, almost, seems, maybe, like, then, later, eventually, basically, so, many, a lot, things, due to the fact (or any variations of the fact that), in reality, very, really, forms of the verb “to be”
  • In the intro, nix all book-review commentary—i.e. “is fascinating, interesting…”
  • Avoid meaningless sentences–i.e. “Authors rely heavily on symbolism.”
  • Contractions
  • While I am not suggesting that you avoid all modifiers, you certainly should be conscious of how you are using them. Yet, definitely avoid the likes of really, basically, very, excellent, terrible, etc.
  • Avoid misspelling proper nouns!

Remember:

  • When writing about literature, write in the present tense.
  • Active voice should be your default voice and only use passive when you are CHOOSING to use passive voice.
  • Get comfortable writing in complex and compound sentences.
  • Introductions and conclusions are factored into the grading of this essay.
  • Read your essay aloud and you will hear many diction and syntax issues.

Keys to Good Writing:

  • Cohesion—Every sentence fits together; paragraphs flow smoothly.  Ensure that the entire discussion comes together as one unified discussion of your text and its context.
  • Concision—Less is more.  Use fewer words to explain yourself.  Begin fusing sentences by merging ideas into tightly knit phrases.
  • Precision—Accuracy.  Use words that accurately capture what you mean.  Don’t settle for words or expressions that come close.
  • Coherence—Does your essay make sense? Are your ideas organized in a logical sequence? Do you prove your thesis? Do the parts contain the essence of the whole?

HW due 1/21: High School Poem

1. Final Poem of the Term! Theme: High School. As for rhyme and rhythm, that is completely up to you. Just as you have been doing all term, I want you to put deliberate thought into the creation of each line of verse. The poem must be complemented by either a visual (i.e. painting, drawing, film, dance, photo, etc.), sound (i.e. instrument, beat boxing, etc.), or prose. This is due Tuesday!

2. Thursday, you will post the following poems to the class forum. So gather them and prepare them for posting:

  • An Emotion
  • Villanelle
  • Confessional
  • Elegy
  • Activist (Harlem Ren)
  • Modernist Gratitude
  • Imagist
  • Beat
  • Spoken Word
  • Essence
  • High School

HW due 1/19: Slaughterhouse Five

1. Slaughterhouse Five–Complete Chapter 5! Based on the weekend’s reading and based on our conversations up to this point, craft two discussion questions!  Remember, with these two questions you are shaping discussion of this novel. The questions should be rooted in the reading and should lead us to a probing discussion of the text. Keep in mind that literary analysis asks that we closely examine the devices/elements to make holistic sense of the novel.
2. Class Forum–Post your introduction!